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It has neat rhythm but the protruding thread on the right is a bit disturbing. (The one on the bottom is okay.) I like the white flowers in the background and the fact that you didn't give in to the fashion and didn't made them completely unrecognizable bokeh discs. They are just right this way as they are counterpoint the main theme flowers with both deir upright position and colours (lights). A fully blurred bokeh would steal the counterpoint and eject the theme into the void. This way (as you did it) is far better!